-add atmospheric background to white ones –signpost when moving on between images

-split up some research pages

-move planning down

-bump contrast

-make sure that writing is legible

I had a scare with losing my PowerPoint to corruption which has taught me never to trust Microsoft or any of their products for the second time. In reflection I don’t think the thinking over the layout of my PowerPoint was too much- Kelcy, my tutor, specifically noted that it reflected my way of working nicely and showed off the way that my project developed in a clear way rather than try to conform to the norms of laying out the work and confuse the message. It took a lot more effort but that comment makes it seem worthwhile, and I don’t think I could have avoided the pathways that lead to that result practically. What I take away from it however, is that specific message is as important to any ‘commissioned’ project as it is to illustration- finding the crux of what you need to convey causes everything to gradually fall into place. Rushing the process of finding that wasn’t particularly beneficial to me this time though…